![]() He stumbles through reconciliation in a bit of a haze and eventually heads outside where a concerned mother and her two kids ask if something’s wrong. Instead of going to Anya’s for dinner, Lonan finds himself at a church confessional.Unbeknownst to her, Lonan’s not staying for dinner as Anya invited him to her place as a thank you! However this news doesn’t break well and the two bicker until they’re both successfully upset.In the middle of this ritual, Eliza gets home and speaks to him as she unwinds, reading rather cryptic notes from fortune cookies she’s brought home with takeout. ![]() We know from Moth Work that one of Lonan’s hobbies is holding his breath underwater, and he does this in this scene to think. Lonan is back in his apartment, filling up his bathroom sink.From some observation, Lonan finally figures out Anya’s husband is actually dead and she’s struggling with grief. Anya gets back from running errands and at first, seems to be a *chill mom* but as she and Lonan interact more, we get to see that something isn’t fully right with her.This is where the “wicked child” aspect of this chapter comes in as he compares the wickedness he feels he and others in his life possess to the full innocence of Joey. Anya dips before the scene starts to grab some extra supplies to make Lonan some sourdough so Lonan is tasked with watching her young son Joey while he tapes up the baseboards.She’s there to take him up to her apartment to paint her kitchen as her husband is away and can’t do it, a plan he was not aware of! (Eliza’s voluntold him to hopefully distract him from wanting to help his friend which is outlined in update #1). We go through Lonan’s lonely morning routine (lol) that’s interrupted by Anya, a neighbour he vaguely recognizes.TW: lots of religious content in this one. Here’s a scene breakdown of this chapter, which is probably the longest chapter I’ve written in years (6300 words). This is why it’s taken me a while to update on this book, but I’ve finally completed the chapter and am now here to share it with y’all! I’m back with another writing update for Feeding Habits (Moth Work #2) at last!Ī few things since the last update: this project is 100% going to be a novel and also has a title (Feeding Habits)!Ĭhapter two has been sort of strange to write as I actually had written a majority of it before starting over after realizing the events I’d written needed to happen later.
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